Tanka challenge 4/27/13

[gurdymonkey]

Measured in gray hairs
Or a clock's tick, time never
Stops playing its tricks.
Like water cupped in the hand
The day dripped through my fingers.

Comments

Oh, how true!

[kareina.livejournal.com]

Someday I will catch the person who sneaks in and changes all of the clocks forward a couple of hours while I am distracted....

[katerit.livejournal.com]

I love the image of the last two lines.