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gurdymonkey ([personal profile] gurdymonkey) wrote2009-04-19 10:37 pm
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Tanka challenge 04/19/09

Night lies heavily
On the district. A dog barks,
The trees are silent.
No sleep comes to soothe her;
No breeze wafts in from the bay.

I suck at Tanka :p

[identity profile] karisu-sama.livejournal.com 2009-04-20 08:22 am (UTC)(link)
The heat of the day
Refuses to abandon
Its grip now, at night.
It taunts the restless people
Who lie haplessly awake.

Re: I suck at Tanka :p

[identity profile] gurdymonkey.livejournal.com 2009-04-20 04:34 pm (UTC)(link)
It does not suck as much as you think it does. It has something to say and it uses complete sentences, which puts you way ahead of some folks.