Tanka challenge 11/06/09

[gurdymonkey]

Clouds race and tumble,
Yet for all that, it seems
Such a timid rain.
Mist would be more aggressive
Than this pathetic dripping!

Comments

[ladycelia.livejournal.com]

I like this one a lot.

[la-peregrina.livejournal.com]

As do I.