Tanka challenge 11/1/10

[gurdymonkey]

Boats bob at moorings,
Their masts afire as the
Sun sinks in the bay.
Halyards chime gently as day
Eases slowly into night.


(SOMEONE is out of practice.....)

Comments

[didjiman.livejournal.com]

Very nice imagery. Is ending a line with "the" kosher?