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gurdymonkey ([personal profile] gurdymonkey) wrote2012-04-25 08:17 pm
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Tanka challenge 4/25/12

It's quiet enough
To hear the random patter
Of rain on shingle.
A purplish slice of dusk shows
Through the skylight overhead.

[identity profile] katerit.livejournal.com 2012-04-26 08:04 pm (UTC)(link)
I can picture "a purplish slice of dusk" - and I love the image of a slice of dusk.

[identity profile] gurdymonkey.livejournal.com 2012-04-26 09:10 pm (UTC)(link)
Well, "rectangle" didn't fit. ;-D