Tanka challenge 04/02/09
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gurdymonkeyA polished mirror
Twins the dawn sky above it,
Glum with seaborne clouds.
A lone boat glides up-channel
To pass beneath a green bridge.
(People are writing stuff. I am pleased.)
Twins the dawn sky above it,
Glum with seaborne clouds.
A lone boat glides up-channel
To pass beneath a green bridge.
(People are writing stuff. I am pleased.)
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Date: 2009-04-06 07:32 pm (UTC)My 4/2 attempt:
stream dances in banks
fox trail crosses over white ground
wooden hands grasp blue
green spears push upward to sun
mountain peaks gather dark clouds