Tanka challenge 11/05/09

[gurdymonkey]

Ramparts of dark clouds
Advance upon the east hills
With desperate speed.
Is that pounding rain I hear
Or is it all in my head?

(It looks like rain.  Weather.com says 30% chance, but it really looks like it wants to dump.)

Comments

[katerit.livejournal.com]

I want rain - I really do.

[gurdymonkey.livejournal.com]

So do I. My skull displays somewhat barometer-like tendencies and the break would be welcome, not to mention good for the water table.