Tanka challenge 4/26/10

[gurdymonkey]

The lights of houses
In the hills defy the night
Despite their distance.
Here we are, shining, they cry.
As I watch from my window.

Comments

[reynardine.livejournal.com]

I really like this one.

[gurdymonkey.livejournal.com]

Funny, this one felt rather forced during the writing. Glad it appears to read better than it wrote.