Tanka challenge 4/8/13

[gurdymonkey]

At night, a high wind
Makes this old house shudder and creak
Like a ship at sea.
Lying beneath the eaves, I
Listen to the storm's music.

Comments

[katerit.livejournal.com]

I love this one - great imagery. If you ever glean yours into a "best of" collection, include this.

[gurdymonkey.livejournal.com]

Now THERE'S a mammoth undertaking, given the number of these I've tossed off over the years.....

[katerit.livejournal.com]

True that - but worth doing, I would think. Not that I'm saying you should - I'm just saying you could - and it would be cool if you did. Anyway - bookmark this one.